I definitely don't like the weather today. What a disgusting weather it is! Every time when it rains, I hate to go to school because my clothes always get wet.
Even though I may have already worn the raincoat, the terrible rain still made my pants and shoes became wet, and I really hate that! Since the only way for me to get to school every day is to ride my bike. I don't have other choices.
I hope the weather could be always shinny so that I can never need to worry about if my clothes would get wet, I even hope that I could have a sedan! However, I know both of the two things are impossible. Forget it; I think I should face the music!
Even though I may have already worn the raincoat, the terrible rain still made my pants and shoes became wet, and I really hate that! Since the only way for me to get to school every day is to ride my bike. I don't have other choices.
I hope the weather could be always shinny so that I can never need to worry about if my clothes would get wet, I even hope that I could have a sedan! However, I know both of the two things are impossible. Forget it; I think I should face the music!
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What do you mean by "I think I should face the MUSIC!" ? It would be better if you describe it more detaily.I guess it's Daneil's "A bad day"?
"Forget it; I think I should face the music!" A little correction -- it's forget ABOUT it. By the way, I would like to know whetehr it's good to put a semicolon or a exclamation. Maybe we could ask Bill to explain this in the nexty class.
On the other hand, your paragraph is coherent and fluent. Well-done and keep going!
Hey, thanks for explaining the meaning of FACING THE MUSIC today!
It is cool that you know that in a film!
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